Hello Hannah! I really like your subjects that you have for your three different grounds in the first picture, but like Janice talked about in her announcement we have to try to get everything in focus, so maybe try this photo again just with everything in focus. I think the framing is nice and the colors of the foreground subject play off of the red barn in the background. I believe Janice also said getting the sky in the picture can mess with the lighting so maybe also try an angle where you don't get as much sky. For the second picture it is a little hard to tell what you want to be the subjects in the different grounds. I think maybe changing the framing could help. Possibly including more of the subject could help with this, like if you want the corner of the building to be a subject try to add more of it so it doesn't just look like it is in the way of the shot you actually wanted. I do like how the fence seems to kind of fade off to the the back of the photo.
USA. 1947. Fire in Hoboken, facing Manhattan. What really caught my eye here was the contrast. In the foreground, you see destruction. Th...
Hello Hannah! I really like your subjects that you have for your three different grounds in the first picture, but like Janice talked about in her announcement we have to try to get everything in focus, so maybe try this photo again just with everything in focus. I think the framing is nice and the colors of the foreground subject play off of the red barn in the background. I believe Janice also said getting the sky in the picture can mess with the lighting so maybe also try an angle where you don't get as much sky.
ReplyDeleteFor the second picture it is a little hard to tell what you want to be the subjects in the different grounds. I think maybe changing the framing could help. Possibly including more of the subject could help with this, like if you want the corner of the building to be a subject try to add more of it so it doesn't just look like it is in the way of the shot you actually wanted. I do like how the fence seems to kind of fade off to the the back of the photo.
You need a very close foreground object in each image. Your objects also need to be more solid so you can be sure where you're focusing. Metadata?
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